School magazine cover - Draft 1

This is a magazine front cover that i have made for the school

I askes students in my class what are the strenghs of the magazine cover the weeknesses and what improvements could be made. these are my results:-













Strenghs

• How the picture breaks the splash
• The circle around his hand
• Good shadow on splash
• Writing is clear on background
• Interesting font
• Cleverness of the picture with quote
• Like the link with homework
• Writing stands out well

Weeknesses

• No capital letters in quotations
• Lot of space left
• Make background more interesting
• Red pug is harsh to the eye
• The pug looks boring
• Logo is too small

Improvements

• Make logo bigger
• Make pug more clear
• Change colour of pug
• Add capital letters to Quotations
• Avoid using red
• Add a bit more text
• Make image bigger
• More information about the school