Strengths
- good use of school colours
- like the Polaroid snap shot
- good how page isn't divided into different sections
- text is a bit boring
- no page number on the second page down
- logo too small
Improvements
- use more interesting font
- put page number on second picture
- make logo a bit bigger
i have taken all of these comments into consideration and will be making some changes on other drafts until the target audience finds it suits then best
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