Music Magazine contents page FInal

This is the second draft that i have done for my music contents page for my magazine. The changes that i have done is lowered the pictures at the bottom of the page and also i have added an e-mail address, phone number and address.

Music Contents page draft 1

For today's double lesson i made the first draft of my music contents page and this is what i did.

todays lesson

during today's lesson i am going to design my first mock up of my music contents page my peers have told me to follow the same colour scheme and fonts because they fell that it will look more sophisticated and conventional.

todays lesson

In today's lesson all i have done is Analise my third draft and what my peers have said is that the title is very interesting and eye catching and there is a good colour scheme. Some bad points were that the picture is too blurry. So i will take these comments into account and make the changes that they have told me to do.

Music magazine cover - Draft 3

This is the third draft of my music magazine i have made the background fade from light to dark side to side and i have also changed the font of the "100th Edition" because my peers felt that it didn't look very professional.

Music magazine cover - Draft 2

This is my second draft of my music magazine front cover what i have done is made some corrections on the text and have also made the signature bigger and i have gave it a shadow. in my final draft i have been told to maybe make the background fade from dark to light around the image. So i am going to give that a go and see what it is like and see if it makes it look more authentic.

Music Magazine Draft 1

This is my first draft of my music magazine "justify"

Colour Scheme

These are some of the different colour schemes that i was thinking of using and over all the students chose purple grey blue and white over all of the rest. This is the colour scheme that i have decided to use in my first design to see what it looks like.

School magazine Contents page- Final Draft

This is the final draft of my school magazine contents page i have changed all of the things that people wanted me to change and my overall remarks were good

• good use of colour
• interesting font
• good pictures
• Pictures match with pages

School magazine Contents page- Draft 1

This is the first draft of my school magazine contents page.

Strengths

• good use of school colours
• like the Polaroid snap shot
• good how page isn't divided into  different sections

Weaknesses

• text is a bit boring
• no page number on the second page down
• logo too small

Improvements

• use more interesting font
• put page number on second picture
• make logo a bit bigger

i have taken all of these comments into consideration and will be making some changes on other drafts until the target audience finds it suits then best